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conrail4129 06-14-2014 11:06 PM

Composition Suggestions
 
Hey all,

http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...18&key=9453878

Got poor composition on this one. Personally I think it looks nice, although I'm thinking cropping off the top and right-hand side a hair would be the best alleviation to the "poor balance". Anyway, any suggestions are welcome!

-Patrick

CSX1702 06-15-2014 01:18 AM

Probably some off top and left. That should un-center the train.

Also, and this is completely up to you, but I'd move the watermark to the bottom somewhere.

Joe the Photog 06-15-2014 01:32 AM

That watermark is just plain stupid, truth be known. As for the cropping, take a lot of the top and then some of the right. If you have a later frame, I think that one would be better.

Mberry 06-15-2014 01:52 AM

Yep, way too much sky. It does not add to the scene IMO.

MagnumForce 06-15-2014 03:43 AM

Seems very dark to me, too.

Joe the Photog 06-16-2014 11:14 AM

Really, you should have zoomed in more to cut off the building but keep the stop sign and keep the train where it is at. I'd also have included more on the left

mark woody 06-16-2014 12:24 PM

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Agree with Joe, my take. Cropped, adjusted levels and contrast work from original for better results.


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