RailPictures.Net Forums

RailPictures.Net Forums (http://www.railpictures.net/forums/index.php)
-   Railroad Photography Forum (http://www.railpictures.net/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=9)
-   -   Simple shot (http://www.railpictures.net/forums/showthread.php?t=16362)

asis80 05-14-2013 01:04 PM

Simple shot
 
http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...36&key=9941736

Might have been the fact that my eyes were a bit heavy and tired, and got into my old habit of processing photo's after a 2 day across the state trip. Distortion perhaps? I'm amazed at how much 24mm distorts on the 24-105. I'm on the fence with the cropping. Looks ok to me, but I'm guessing get rid of the left hand side a little more, and the bottom? Thanks in advance!

Ben

JimThias 05-14-2013 01:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asis80 (Post 166536)
I'm amazed at how much 24mm distorts on the 24-105.

I'm not amazed. I guess I find it pretty average, actually.

Anyway, CW and crop a little tighter.

asis80 05-14-2013 01:27 PM

I'm going from a 10-22 on a crop body to the 24-105 on a full frame, I'm not to keen into the whole technical aspects of that, so I dunno. I'm in dark territory when trying to understand it :-)

BurghMan 05-14-2013 09:51 PM

Ben,

It has unusual balance. That by itself is not necessarily a bad thing. But a screener clicking rapidly through submissions might not realize that the objects on the left tell the story as well.

I do think you should shave a little off the left. Maybe right at the 2nd light post? In the comments, I'd try to make it a little more clear that the objects on the left are part of the Mon River Dam. That could explain why it is included in the shot.

You may want to shave just a little off the right as well.

Had that train at work last night. The 3rd unit was QGRY by the way.

Good luck!

PLEzero 05-14-2013 11:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JimThias (Post 166537)

CW and crop a little tighter.


What he said.

Holloran Grade 05-15-2013 12:24 AM

Maybe pan back and widen the shot, so the whole picture looks a little more balanced with the train not being such a large influence.


All times are GMT. The time now is 02:35 AM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2020, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.