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nikos1 09-06-2013 07:52 PM

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http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...35&key=6496731
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MagnumForce 09-06-2013 08:00 PM

More sky, it's too centered, maybe add a fuzz to the right too. Getting close to the edge.

JRMDC 09-06-2013 08:11 PM

lighten your shadows and lower your highlights also, maybe mess with the exposure a bit more than that. That white area of gravel seems strong, and the train seems a bit dark for the sun you had.

Joe the Photog 09-06-2013 08:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MagnumForce (Post 169898)
More sky, it's too centered, maybe add a fuzz to the right too. Getting close to the edge.

Definitely more sky and maybe a little sky on the bottom.

nikos1 09-06-2013 08:35 PM

Sent an earlier frame, I'll wait and see I guess, the rejected one looks more balanced to me.
http://www.railpictures.net/images/d...1378498519.jpg

MagnumForce 09-06-2013 08:43 PM

That one is 100 times better.

Cjbdiesel 09-06-2013 09:08 PM

The right is bugging me to death. Open that more and add the listed suggestions above.

nikos1 09-06-2013 11:22 PM

The right side is tight to keep out some construction barrels and other crap, earlier frame was accepted so I guess they wanted more smoke. Thanks guys

troy12n 09-07-2013 01:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nikos1 (Post 169917)
The right side is tight to keep out some construction barrels and other crap, earlier frame was accepted so I guess they wanted more smoke. Thanks guys

For me:
1. needs more room on the right. If something ugly is there, make it go away...
2. if it was me, I would remove some on the left, that road really does nothing for me, and it's awkwardly cut off. I would remove the whole road and some of the trees to tighten up the left
3. reduce brightness or levels on the ballast, it's blinding me...
4. add a tad more contrast
5. lower levels in the sky just a tad

This is definitely fixable and should get on...

nikos1 09-07-2013 01:36 AM

Its on already [photoid=450180]

stlgevo51 09-07-2013 03:40 AM

I will never get tired of seeing these A&M Alco shots. Ever since I ventured down there three weeks ago I have been fascinated with their operation. Too bad it will come to an end with those hideous EMDs.


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