Here's my take. I seriously love the first one and the exposure was spot on. I think for RP purposes, they might be looking for a little more breathing room along the right side between the train and edge of the photo.
The second one is nice as well. I'm guessing the overexposed rejection is from the concrete/sidewalk areas. If you can lower that, I'd think (again, only my opinion) it'd stand a very good chance of being accepted.
Hope that helps.
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