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Old 11-06-2016, 02:13 PM   #5
jac_murphy
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Originally Posted by JRMDC View Post
Adding the great expanse of foliage on the right, and bottom a bit, to your previous composition, does not work. It's a "dead space" despite all the color. And what John said re color. Just look at the color of the river!
The Hudson River is often a murky reddish-brown colour and looks alright to me in Joseph's image, but I agree with everything else that's been said re: colour and composition.

-Jacques
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