First: very nice color. The semi-graphic composition, verticals up top, circles at the bottom, is OK. I guess what keeps me from liking it more is the light is fairly flat and even across the picture, not much contrast.
Second: I don't care for the composition, with the posts obscuring the side of the car. Also, the right side of the shot, I'm not sure what it is about, not sure where my eyes should go. The D and smokestack are on the left and the right is not balanced. Nice effect with the steam coming out the stack.
Just two personal reactions.
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