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Old 08-15-2007, 12:28 AM   #3
Carl Becker
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Originally Posted by JRMDC
Second: I don't care for the composition, with the posts obscuring the side of the car. Also, the right side of the shot, I'm not sure what it is about, not sure where my eyes should go. The D and smokestack are on the left and the right is not balanced. Nice effect with the steam coming out the stack.
I agree here. Plus, regardless of the balance problems, I think something better to photograph when you want a composition like this is the cab of a locomotive. However, unless it's of a really unique subject, a shot like that won't get accepted to RP.
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