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Old 05-29-2010, 05:03 AM   #10
troy12n
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The sharpened shot is much better, the original was really soft. Also I notice you shot it at f4.5, try a little smaller aperture, say f6.3 or 7.1 if possible to get a little more background detail, you have pretty shallow depth of field there. The composition is pretty good, especially if this is your first attempt.
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