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Old 05-15-2013, 10:03 PM   #7
jac_murphy
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Originally Posted by JimThias View Post
Can you step back at all at this location? That would allow you to bring the elements closer together by zooming in a bit. If you back up a bit and zoom in, you can bring pole and wires closer to the train, which will also bring the train closer into the frame overall. As is, the two subjects, the train and the codeline, are separated a bit too much.
Something to think about; I'll give it a try next chance I get.

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Originally Posted by JRMDC View Post
I agree that Jim's advice will probably make for a more RP-suitable shot, but I do like it as it is, the extra separation to me is a feature, not a bug.

As for the level, it doesn't help that the sapling on the right is fairly close to vertical whereas the poles in the distance on the left are not. Perhaps a better balancing between those two will make look more level.
Ah-ha! That might be the key. I'll give it a go.

-Jacques
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