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Old 08-26-2016, 01:00 PM   #5
Noct Foamer
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Definite progress here! You paid attention to the direction of Light. Yes, needs a little sharpening. If you are using Photoshop CC, the "clarity" slider would help a lot. Otherwise, as John said increase contrast a bit (25%?) Another point I'll mention is the framing is a bit too tight. No need to have the train that close to the edge of the frame, about to exit. I'd also like to see a bit more of the landscape. That would give more sense of time and place, rather than just being an engine shot. But hey--you have moved forward here!


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