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Old 05-06-2020, 01:06 AM   #100
bigbassloyd
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Originally Posted by TedG View Post
Not bad. But you need some more weather references. Maybe add "the dark clouds of a threatening thunderstorm on the horizon" or describe just how unusually hot/cold it was.
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