out of my comfort zone...

[denvillerailfan]

Trying something different in a new area, I like the pics, but don't love them yet. Tried a few different frames and all rejected so far, looking for a better understanding of the Composition (Too Loose) rejection...

Here was my latest attempt -

http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...60&key=1752909

Thanks in advance - Jeff B.

[Freericks]

Way too much sky. Way too much on the left. Even too much on the right (I'd go up to the structure attached to the bridge).

[BobE]

The photo that was accepted was an improvement, but the foreground is too cluttered. That white bread truck is a real distraction. Is there anywhere on that viaduct where you'd have an unobstructed shot of 4-6 spans?

Stay out of your comfort zone. It's the only way you're going to improve. Good luck.

[miningcamper1]

Originally Posted by BobE

Is there anywhere on that viaduct where you'd have an unobstructed shot of 4-6 spans?

Absolutely...

PhotoID: 151191 Photograph © Robert Pisani

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