Old 08-03-2010, 02:03 AM   #1
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This photo got rejected for composition/balance.Any ideas on how to improve it?


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Old 08-03-2010, 02:22 AM   #2
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Crop the right and top.
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Old 08-03-2010, 03:49 AM   #3
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Mostly what Nikos said about this shot. But do you have another version where you let the train trail off behind the power? Otherwise, all you've got is a wedgie/roster of the front end power of a train.
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