Help Please: Balance

amtrak07t · 09-20-2018, 04:20 PM

1st rejection: http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...74&key=7446154

After tweaking...

2nd rejection:
http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...46&key=3965387

Any suggestions on how to crop it? I also have a few other frames with the train in different locations. Thanks

EMTRailfan · 09-20-2018, 04:51 PM

If it were mine, I would try cropping out the power lines bring the train and MOW crew up and taking some of the dark off of the sides...getting rid of the obvious part of the tower if it will work without putting the workers too close to the edge.

Joseph Cermak · 09-20-2018, 06:13 PM

Perhaps a frame with the Metra train a little closer might help? Not sure what you have...

MassArt Images · 09-21-2018, 02:23 PM

Would this picture help you with the composistion/balance that you are searching for?

PhotoID: 671152
Photograph © Mike Danneman

amtrak07t · 09-22-2018, 01:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MassArt Images

Would this picture help you with the composistion/balance that you are searching for?

That has my PCA vote right there. 10/10 great lighting, composition...follows the rule of thirds and everything