Old 02-17-2016, 11:10 PM   #1
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I would appreciate any input on the composition of this 1/60 handheld pan shot, which I have not submitted yet. Is it good to go as is? Or should it be a tighter crop?

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Old 02-18-2016, 11:47 AM   #2
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I'll say tighter crop. The fence in the foreground and wires across the sky aren't appealing to me. It's a well-executed pan, but I'm not a fan of the surrounding scene. The only way to cure that is to have less of the surrounding scene.
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Old 02-21-2016, 08:34 PM   #3
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Thanks Mike, appreciate the feedback!

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