Old 02-16-2011, 08:43 PM   #1
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Hello I was wondering if this has any chance?
I didn't crop it yet.
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Old 02-16-2011, 09:47 PM   #2
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Don't think so. It's overcast, seems to be real soft (almost OOF) and you cut off the train. The whole scene is sort of awkward with a "going away" feel to it.

Any frames where you got more of a broadside and better quality?

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Old 02-16-2011, 10:55 PM   #3
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Chase I Don't have anything better of the holiday train. So I picked two others.
Again let me know
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Old 02-17-2011, 07:18 AM   #4
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Thats an interesting bridge, but you need to shoot at a better angle. As Chase said your composition is kind of ''awkward''.
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Old 02-17-2011, 03:33 PM   #5
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The last two look way too square. You're too low or to close to the bridge as I see it and cutting off too much of the train.

Agreed with the other guys about the first shot, only too add that the weather was rotten (Poor Lighting) and the shot appears unlevel. Done right, I think this location works better. Include the cemetery down below, level the shot, get a train coming toward you on a better weather day.
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Old 02-17-2011, 05:55 PM   #6
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thanks Joe
lighting was bad that day
The bottom 2 are the very begining of the bridge where it comes out of the woods.
I can always work on the cropping of them I just put them up tok get opinions
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Old 03-07-2011, 06:34 AM   #7
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Too much sky, and a cloudy day, among other things. I do like the bridge.
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