Old 01-31-2012, 03:11 PM   #1
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Any ideas guys?

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Old 01-31-2012, 03:46 PM   #2
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Hi, Juan;

I like your work as w whole, but these are too tight and too centered. I think the main problem with these two are that you were too close tothe subject to make it work.
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Old 01-31-2012, 09:20 PM   #3
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I also wish you showed us more of what appears to be an interesting location, but in themselves, as roster shots, they are too centered (the first one horizontally, and the second one both horizontally and vertically).
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Old 02-01-2012, 01:22 PM   #4
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Thanks guys! appreciate it!
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