Old 05-10-2010, 06:13 AM   #1
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I like this shot from last November, with 734 laying down a pretty impressive smokescreen. But, I can't help but get this thought in the back of my mind that they'll hit me with a PEQ because not enough of the engine is showing.

I'd appreciate your opinions on the matter.
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Old 05-10-2010, 01:48 PM   #2
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It's a toss-up as to acceptance. You will only know if you try.

That said, while there is stuff like about the shot, such as the smokebox and the steam, there is a lack of composition. The eye doesn't have a path to follow. If the sky was blue or orange or something, or a crew person on walkway that would help.

Your own shot here give the eye a lot of direction as to where to go:

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Other recent steamy shots with well defined composition:

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An oldy but goody:

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Old 05-10-2010, 02:40 PM   #3
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Hi Paolo,

Steam cloud shots are definitely one of those "eye of the beholder" things. Dressed up (cropped and post processed) appropriately, it could be anything from an SC to a PEQ, depending upon the person who looks at it. I've seen "steam cloud" SCs here that just left me scratching my head and others that went unnoticed by both the Screeners and the audience that left me feeling the submitter had been robbed.

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Old 05-10-2010, 03:01 PM   #4
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Those other pictures definitely have more contrast and detail than yours, try some photoshop magic on it.
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