Composition Two Times

[David Harrison]

Close quarters here...damn trees. Tried to catch the train coming out the tube.
I'm trying to keep the train out of the center. DH
First rejection was for leaning.
http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...65&key=9590644

Second rejection was for composition.
http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...86&key=1906257

Third rejection was again....composition. http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...98&key=6710851

[miningcamper1]

Looks like they really don't want this one. Maybe let it sit for a while and then try a wider view?

[bigbassloyd]

I think a vertical composition here would be more satisfying for what you're wanting to accomplish. The entire left side of the frame isn't providing proper balance.

Loyd L.

[David Harrison]

"They don't like this one".......LOL. http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...65&key=9590644, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...86&key=1906257, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...98&key=6710851, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...97&key=4904130, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...10&key=6453710, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...29&key=1521747, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...32&key=4918417, http://www.railpictures.net/viewreje...1626......then

PhotoID: 666512 Photograph © David Harrison

Vertical worked. Thanks Bigbassloyd.

DH

[miningcamper1]

Good that your perseverance paid off, but you were literally inches away from obstruction by the hanging foliage.

[MassArt Images]

Originally Posted by bigbassloyd

I think a vertical composition here would be more satisfying for what you're wanting to accomplish. The entire left side of the frame isn't providing proper balance.

Loyd L.

Sage advice from the Wilds of West Virginia. Well done Loyd with one L!!

[bigbassloyd]

Originally Posted by MassArt Images

Well done Loyd with one L!!

And you get two cookies for realizing it. (Even though I've typed my name at the end of every post since 2006.)



Loyd L.