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Old 07-01-2017, 07:50 PM   #4
John West
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Good idea, and worth trying again. The composition needs improving, among other things the bright lights at the top of the image are distracting and angles of the shed are bothersome. I wonder if there is a vantage point to the right that would allow you to frame the scene with a more balanced shed structure, have the tracks more vertical in the image, and all the people coming right at you, with the escalators at the bottom of the picture.
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